My Recount About My Holiday
In Te Manuga we have be writing about our recount about our holiday. We were learning about write a recout.What I could do better is put more detail in my story. “We're going bowling’’ said my Aunt. Me and my and my cousins screamed yesss like barking dogs. When me and my cousins were going we were talking about the worst thing we did in school. I did something bad to my friend but I’m not tell who it was. I did this I told to look into the water bottle and then squeezed the water bottle to his face!!! When we got there I wasn't Impressed and the shoes were ugly. When we started to play bowling the bowling ball’s were so heavy I felt the bowling ball was gonna fall on my little tiny toes. So I had to get The lightest bowling ball. It was little heavy but I had no choice. When it was my turn I took a one deeeeep breath and I thought i’m gonna get pin 1 but I got 5 pins. My mind was thinking I got this so I got another turn again but I ...