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Writing goal sheet

In Te Maunga we have be make our own writing goals I have to practice on my   Sentence Structure vocabulary and Ideas I can put more detail in my writing and put more epic words and bigger words and make my sentences longer that's what I  need to practice on my writing. this is my writing goals down here ↓ Surface Features Deeper Features Spelling Punctuation Sentence Structure Vocabulary Idea Organisation Where am I? copy and paste the definition from above R4 R4 R3 R3 R3 R4 I spell most essential list words correctly and attempt some difficult words using spelling rules I use capital letters, and sentence endings correctly for most of my sentences and some other punctuation correctly am beginning to write sentences of different lengths-simple, compound and complex sentences. I can write a lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail. Noun / verbs / adjectives. I have many simple ideas on the topic w...

Beach ed

In Te Maunge we went to beach with  Sam, Liam and Toobs if you don't know them they are surf Lifeguards.What we did at the beach was we played beach game and we learn how to get of rip,how run into the water and swim between the flags.What we played was Infinity tag and other fun games.On Monday we had to make animation what we learn at the beach. This is my animation😜😜😜😜

Rikesh is poem

In Te Maunga we been making a metaphors poem about our self's. This is my poem I hope you like it. Rikesh is a sports car zooming around a race track. Rikesh is a arcade full with arcade games Rikesh is a shop with lollies who gets a lot of customers. Rikesh is a fizzy drink that makes a lot of noise. Rikesh is a pair of shoes that have holes but get fix magically.

Recount

In Te Maunga we have be make recounts What's in a recount. introduction The boby conclusion What I think good was add awesome words. What I could do better was I could make more research on google. Here is my recount. In the weekend at my house I was on Google and Youtube searching random things and I found a lot of really really weird stuff. The first weird thing was in Mexico.So in Mexico is a crystal cave and it was 300m deep.Next weird thing was a  dark blue hole it looks like a deep sink hole .When I saw this there was more of those blue holes.Then I saw the Rainbow warrior.The Rainbow warrior was a ship that sank in NZ.I was spending  a hour searching a video about it but I  found a  recording of people explaining  what happened to the Rainbow warrior  someone put a bomb in ship.I was finsh with google stuff then I did something else like made a pillow fort.I made a THE MOST COOLEST  PiLLOW FORT EVER.One hour later.The pillow ...

Get NZ Writing Challenge

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3 weeks ago In Te Maunge we have be doing the Get NZ Writing Challenge. We were describing our selves with metaphors. First we had to pick our best metaphors and put it on these post cards that Whaea Becks. 3 day later we were finish the poster.    We were sending our poster and our post cards to Te Horo School in Wellington. I wish we could see there parcel. 😏😏😏😏😏😏 2 days later the parcel arrived. When saw the parcel were shocked. When the teacher opened parcel the soooooo cool. This is there postcards put together This our poster